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I  Remember, I Still Remember

You see me smiling
But have you ever thought of what hides behind?
In the places that no one sees
Where my hidden sorrow and insanity lurk
You probably do not see it
But I remember, I still remember

At the moment we appear friends
Smiling at one another
But you do not recollect what you’ve done to me
Every insult or name you’ve ever called me
All of that still stays in the past for you
But I remember, I still remember

We talk of similar things
But I know it’s all fake
You’ve tried this act before
Trying to make you look like a nice person
Like a cat plays with a mouse
But I remember, I still remember

There you go again
Spitting your insults like fire
You do not see what it does
Though I seem unaffected by your words, it hurts
The sorrow and insanity inside grow stronger
You won’t remember, But I’ll remember

I’ll always remember
I made this one day in school when I was all depressed and angry. Please don't hate on this, I was just angry and needed to get the rage out. Most of this poem is about my elementary school days.
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xKYUU-CHANx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist
I write this way all of the time. When you feel a strong emotion it seems to be able to make people show deeper emotions with their work. This is nice, good job.
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pokephantom99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you
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xKYUU-CHANx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist
You are welcome ^^
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The-Multi-Artist Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Writer
Realistic and engaging. Great work!
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pokephantom99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much
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The-Multi-Artist Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Writer
No problem :)
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jaggedsquirrel Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice work
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pokephantom99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. Elementary/Early Middle School were hard times :'(
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jaggedsquirrel Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, if you get a chance you should check out my work
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pokephantom99 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've seen some of it
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